Formslipper

I read it, and laughed on the inside all the way through, then out loud at the end. I'm not sure why I laughed, maybe because there was christmas music ...

I read it, only to think that the dialogue was good and it was a riveting story. However, the message you're trying to impart is ambiguous. If you're a Christian, ...

I read it. Thought it was a little too tellie. You give away the characters; you don't show their actions. Instead, the story's handed to me on a verbose silver ...

I read it. Here lies a spontaneous criticism of your "dramatic poem": Through my fingers, Good opener down and down. Flow contrivance- had you been in a dramatic sate, you ...

I have not read it yet. Instead of simply reading it and then giving m a few thoughts, I'll just give you my spontaneous reactions after each line, in red. ...

I read it, and my first impression was shallow . And I'll tell you why- It's hard to convey emotions using only words and paper, especially when all you're doing ...

I read it. See what I did there? Anyway, I thought your use of periods was a bit of a cheap tactic. The reason? Well, as I went about the ...

I read it, and thought it was very quaint, certainly simple enough for me to wrap my head around, which is always a good thing. At some points, however, I ...

I read it. There doesn't seem to be very much to say regarding flaws; there are none as far as I can tell. Instead of any glaring weaknesses, I'd say ...

I read it, and thought it was very nice. Your poem does a good job of keeping pace with the reader's impressions... In other words, your lines of imagery were ...

I read it, and thought it was meh. I'm really not sure what this is supposed to be. You're writing as if you're conversing, which adds no depth to what ...

I read it, and identified completely with it. I hate petty conversation, small talk- you called it "transient"... which is so true! I'm an introvert as well ;) But don't ...

I read it. This is a difficult poem to decipher, but it's imagery was acute. If you keep this kind of writing up, then you're sure to be noticed, and ...

I read it. First off- I'll have you know that I'm a Christian, too. You probably come from a household that stresses purity, etc. So do I. That must have ...

I read it. It was darkly entertaining. Somehow, on the other side of things (the alternate and less poignant version of the Professor), I found that there was a bit ...