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Re: I am without a language
Hey Spunky!! Thanks for the review! Yea, those parts feel a bit odd. I will remove those :)
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1)
XD. I am bad at writing short stories. And this was rushed. My first chapters always have a rushed tone. About the robots, not to worry, they do play a ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Cehyn in the Earth( Chapter 4)
Hey RandomTalks! Good thing that you think that the third person narrative seems to be better than the first person. :) And thanks for pointing out the mistakes. Thanks for ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.2
So, this is gonna be a trilogy? interesting! Ohh...I call it a ship because its a spaceship Ohhhh..... okay! Got it. :D
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.1
XD. Sleep, sleep! I literally tell people at least ten times day to sleep. You could just make Aria tired and a bit inattentive about the work ;)
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.6
I had a theory about that too. I wrote it in one of your chapters.I have forgotten in now tho
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.6
Also whoops that's supposed to be "no windows" not "now windows"...xD Independence curtailed... O humans, I feel sad for you...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.5
So 20 chapter more and if each chapter has 5 parts each... 100 parts! and if you keep uploading 2 chapters a day and if I keep lagging behind... I ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Understand the nature
Thanks for the review!! And yeah, this was written when I was too tired to write but was too interested to post something XD. That's the main reason behind all ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: ch 2: A sudden shock
To be honest, I am really focused on what to improve, seriously. I can't understand why my descriptions never seem to be in place. Guess I have gotta put a ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.4
XD ;)
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.4
I see, Suspicious lol. And did you know that you have increased one u in your typical "youu" and also one exclamation mark? :D
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: A Day Off Part 1
No problem at all. This notifs receiving problem is happening with some ppl, I guess. A few days ago HKumar also told the same...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: The most disobedient
Hey Mailice! This was the first novel I wrote getting nostalgic about School and also my first try at writing(though I wrote many awful essays before at school) And I ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Cehyn in the Earth(Chapter 1)
Hey Kattee, thanks for the review. That is definitely a problem on her side that she is a bit too arrogant in each and everything except Eliza and her mother. ...
Sep 4, 2021