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Re: The woman who screeched
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Did you know that you were the first person to review my work? I guess you didn't. :D A woman's privacy Is not to ...
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Re: Him
Hey! Forever here with a tiny review! I suck at romantic stuffs but let's see if my review can be of any help. I found some grammatical mistakes in the ...
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Re: Computer
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, there are a lot of questions in my head now. Thid was a bit too confusing. I can't really comprehend whta the matter ...
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Re: I’m Not Funny
Hey! Forever here with a review! I will try the YWS critique sandwich to review your poem. Let's see what I can do. What I liked: The poem is actually ...
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Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.5
Hey! Forever here with a review! Wow. This chapter was a great one proving my assumption wrong. I assumed the time to be about 2120 or something, I guess. However, ...
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Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.4
Hey!Forever here with a short review! WE have some new characters here and they are quite familiar with the main characters. I wonder if they too will be kind of ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: The Witch Who Wrote
Heyyy!! Forever here with a review!! I will just review by stanzas :D There was an Old Witch She lived in the Wood She was all on her own But ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 14
Heyy! Forever here with a review!! She wouldn’t be able to defend herself It will be 'won't' not wouldn't I think. Noriko you better be alright… Italicize this line. It's ...
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Re: Journey to a Dream
Heyy!! Forever here with a short review! Let's jump to the small nitpicks first: This may sound strange, maybe even unusual Isn't strange and unusual the same? At least to ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 1 Part 1)
hey! Forever here with a short review!! Wow, this was so good. I really enjoyed the story and it was fantastic as a first part of a first chapter. You ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: School, School, School
Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! Hm... School pain. Literally, a lot of problems in the school. I really like how you described the pain in quite a funny ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: dishwasher poem
Heyy!! Here for a tiny review!! We have a very cool haiku here. So this is my first haiku review. Let's see what I can do. First of all, I ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: it feels like this
Hey! Forever here with a short review!! This is my first review of prose poetry, so don't expect perfection. Let's get right into it. This was a great prose-poem. It ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Dragons
Heyyy!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, I just love it and now to the review. INTERPRETATION I really liked how you chose first person to write the ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: 3:39 am
Heyy! Forever here with a review! First and foremost, welcome to YWS. Hope you have a great time here :) And now to the story: Me, personally I seek greatness ...
Sep 1, 2021