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Hey! Forever here with a review!! Did you know that you were the first person to review my work? I guess you didn't. :D A woman's privacy Is not to ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review! I suck at romantic stuffs but let's see if my review can be of any help. I found some grammatical mistakes in the ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, there are a lot of questions in my head now. Thid was a bit too confusing. I can't really comprehend whta the matter ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! I will try the YWS critique sandwich to review your poem. Let's see what I can do. What I liked: The poem is actually ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! Wow. This chapter was a great one proving my assumption wrong. I assumed the time to be about 2120 or something, I guess. However, ...

Hey!Forever here with a short review! WE have some new characters here and they are quite familiar with the main characters. I wonder if they too will be kind of ...

Heyyy!! Forever here with a review!! I will just review by stanzas :D There was an Old Witch She lived in the Wood She was all on her own But ...

Heyy! Forever here with a review!! She wouldn’t be able to defend herself It will be 'won't' not wouldn't I think. Noriko you better be alright… Italicize this line. It's ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a short review! Let's jump to the small nitpicks first: This may sound strange, maybe even unusual Isn't strange and unusual the same? At least to ...

hey! Forever here with a short review!! Wow, this was so good. I really enjoyed the story and it was fantastic as a first part of a first chapter. You ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! Hm... School pain. Literally, a lot of problems in the school. I really like how you described the pain in quite a funny ...

Heyy!! Here for a tiny review!! We have a very cool haiku here. So this is my first haiku review. Let's see what I can do. First of all, I ...

Hey! Forever here with a short review!! This is my first review of prose poetry, so don't expect perfection. Let's get right into it. This was a great prose-poem. It ...

Heyyy!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, I just love it and now to the review. INTERPRETATION I really liked how you chose first person to write the ...

Heyy! Forever here with a review! First and foremost, welcome to YWS. Hope you have a great time here :) And now to the story: Me, personally I seek greatness ...