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Re: Isabella-The origin of William’s mother
Hey! Forever here with a review!! I haven't read the story "The town of Richardson" so, I will be focusing on this one only. She lived happily with her husband,Lucas ...
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Re: How Funny
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a very powerful piece that made me think about today's reality. I just wonder if this story is in second person narrative. ...
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 9.2
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Daisy, on the other hand, was still the one clinging on for dear life to one of them. Here you could be a bit ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: The Man With Glass Teeth
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting and a new kind of story. I enjoyed reading it. Let's get into the review. Okay so I can't decide ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Eight
Hey! Forever herever here with a review!! Wow, this was a great chapter if you talk about science stuffs. To be honest, I didn't expect that much success in the ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 9.1
Hey! Forever here with a review!! She managed to find herself at the hall half an hour later and an entire hour before wakeup Thid wakeup should be Wake Up, ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Beautiful Mistake (Time Travel Short Story)
Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review! Welcome to YWS! Hope you have a great time here. Now to the story. The story was a good one and made me ...
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: Silence and Stillness
Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! This was a very strong piece we had here. I really liked all the beautiful imageries and descriptions you have used to convey ...
Sep 29, 2021 -
Re: Heavy Traffic
Hey! Forever here with a review!! First and foremost, you have got to rate this. I don't know what will be the most approproate rating but at least I guess ...
Sep 29, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 8.5
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! "Yeah, I was hoping that mom would be around today morning but she was gone. But we'll only be able to confirm by tomorrow ...
Sep 28, 2021 -
Re: Daughter of a Victim (Doom and Gloom Version)
Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review! Daughter of a victim doesn't really seem to be a bad name. It's quite good and I can't remember having heard that name ...
Sep 28, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 8.4
Hey! Forever here with a review!! The thing is I quite enjoy the fact that Harry is a heavy sleeper in general but he can't sleep even for a short ...
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: Daughter of a Victim (Lighter Version)
Hey! Forever here with a review! First of all, I couldn't find a bit of humour. Nothing humorous happened in the story and the narrator too didn't have a humorous ...
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 8.3
Hey, Forever here with a review!! Nothing unexpected happened here. It was a pretty good part and I am quite interested to know what is gonna happen next. but I ...
Sep 26, 2021 -
Re: The Magic Mushroom - Keep My Casket Closed
Hey! Forever here with a review!! First and foremost, the tense in this part was a lot better than the previous parts. For the previous parts, convert them into past ...
Sep 27, 2021
