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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Isabella-The origin of William’s mother

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I haven't read the story "The town of Richardson" so, I will be focusing on this one only. She lived happily with her husband,Lucas ...

    Oct 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Satire, Realistic Re: How Funny

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a very powerful piece that made me think about today's reality. I just wonder if this story is in second person narrative. ...

    Oct 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 9.2

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Daisy, on the other hand, was still the one clinging on for dear life to one of them. Here you could be a bit ...

    Sep 30, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Man With Glass Teeth

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting and a new kind of story. I enjoyed reading it. Let's get into the review. Okay so I can't decide ...

    Sep 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Eight

    Hey! Forever herever here with a review!! Wow, this was a great chapter if you talk about science stuffs. To be honest, I didn't expect that much success in the ...

    Sep 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 9.1

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! She managed to find herself at the hall half an hour later and an entire hour before wakeup Thid wakeup should be Wake Up, ...

    Sep 30, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Beautiful Mistake (Time Travel Short Story)

    Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review! Welcome to YWS! Hope you have a great time here. Now to the story. The story was a good one and made me ...

    Oct 1, 2021
  • Other » Other, Spiritual Re: Silence and Stillness

    Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! This was a very strong piece we had here. I really liked all the beautiful imageries and descriptions you have used to convey ...

    Sep 29, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Heavy Traffic

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! First and foremost, you have got to rate this. I don't know what will be the most approproate rating but at least I guess ...

    Sep 29, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 8.5

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! "Yeah, I was hoping that mom would be around today morning but she was gone. But we'll only be able to confirm by tomorrow ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Daughter of a Victim (Doom and Gloom Version)

    Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review! Daughter of a victim doesn't really seem to be a bad name. It's quite good and I can't remember having heard that name ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 8.4

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! The thing is I quite enjoy the fact that Harry is a heavy sleeper in general but he can't sleep even for a short ...

    Sep 27, 2021
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: Daughter of a Victim (Lighter Version)

    Hey! Forever here with a review! First of all, I couldn't find a bit of humour. Nothing humorous happened in the story and the narrator too didn't have a humorous ...

    Sep 27, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 8.3

    Hey, Forever here with a review!! Nothing unexpected happened here. It was a pretty good part and I am quite interested to know what is gonna happen next. but I ...

    Sep 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Literature, Health Re: The Magic Mushroom - Keep My Casket Closed

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! First and foremost, the tense in this part was a lot better than the previous parts. For the previous parts, convert them into past ...

    Sep 27, 2021


The continuation of our world depends more on the survival of the kindest than it does on the survival of the fittest.
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