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Re: Back to Square One. (1)
It was really interesting, and I definetly want to read more. I only caught a few gramatical errors like you pt children instead of children's menu. But other than that, ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: heart strings
Wow I really really liked that. I could tell it was written with emotion. I love these heart ache lyrics/poems. This one was especially nice, since there was a lot ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
OHMYGOSH!!!!!!! That made me laugh so hard!!! I was like dying and my mom came in and had to read it. (She also nearly died by the way!) I am ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Dried Apricots
Wow...that was amazing! I saw the title and was like...this is gonna be weird...but it wasn't! It made me think about all the little things that bring back memories...like dried ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: The Runaway
That was interesting. I guess I'd have to read your story to get it. I could kind of feel what the character was feeling though. You think someone's the one, ...
Oct 27, 2009 -
Re: Romero and Julia
Hi, I think this is going a little too fast. How can she be falling for him already? its kinda...um iffy. and also, you need to show not tell. Talk ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: His Eyes Were of the Ocean
OHMYGOSH THAT WAS AMAZING!!! I was wondering, have you ever had dreams about a guy like that? I know I have, and I keep having them! So this was like, ...
Oct 13, 2009 -
Re: :: Snow ::
That was great as well! I liked how you did this AND the rain one. They fit together well. Right as I saw Snow and saw your name I was ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: You Never Loved Me.
I really liked that! It was really well written. I want to read more of your poems because this was amazing! I loved it! It really hit the spot for ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: :: Rain ::
Wow. I really like your work. This was a poem I really wanted to read slowly and I could feel the character's emotion. I love how you described how love ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: life after lapse
I really liked that. It rhymed well, and really made me think. I can definitely relate to that. I didn't see any grammatical errors, and I was glad it was ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (1)
Wow. That was amazing! I'm a big fan of fantasy so I was really excited with this! Only on grammatical error I saw was you put "pored" I think you ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: Can nobody hear me?
I loved that! I could relate to that, and it really struck home. I only saw one mistake and it was you put " realised" and I think it should ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: The War Wind
Wow. That was really well written. I actually enjoyed reading it! It really turned my blood to ice, and it made me sad, but it is true. I only saw ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Exodus Preview
I found a few grammatical errors, but not a lot. It was interesting to hear the story. And I liked how you put the old man is telling the story. ...
Oct 3, 2009