Forestqueen808

I love this poem! You gave me a feel of the city, and I love that. I can see all the lights, hear the hustle and bustle, and you made ...

Hey Orange!(: So, this is a very nice poem. I'm just wondering if you meant to format it like that, as a paragraph rather than in the popular poetry format. ...

This is so good! I honestly don't know what to say about it! I wouldn't change a thing. I have a question though, did you put it to music yet? ...

This is a beautiful poem. Honestly. I love how you described everything. I love the last stanza especially. It kind of shows us a little bit of the girl he's ...

I don't have anything bad to say about this poem! I really like it actually. It shows that sometimes people think, if I love him, he's the only one for ...

Hey there! This is a beautiful poem. I'm not a poetic expert...trust me. I didn't really find anything bad about it. I seriously thought it was gorgeous. Geez I wish ...

Hey Authorgirl! I see you're new here, welcome! (: So, I'll just do a quick review since this piece is short. Bravo! You did some things really well with this ...

Hello NewHero! So, when I read this, I realized that it had a lot of feeling in it, and it probably means a lot to you correct? Well, I thought ...

This was one word: Amazing. It nearly brought me to tears because I have had the same kind of experience. All through seventh grade me and this boy were best ...

Hello there! I'll be your reviewer for today. Okay, so I didn't see any nitpicks. You did an awesome job describing, but sometimes you needed a little more. Especially near ...

Hello meggwriting! I'll be your reviewer for today. Alright, so I know that many of the grammer problems were supposed to be there. It was very effective that you made ...

Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously above them. It was not often that Dacron felt fear, but now it had wrapped its iron hand ...

This was an amazing poem. I cried the first time I've read it, you captured the beauty and the sorrow, and everything about the Savior's death. I have reread it ...

Hahaha! I loved this! I thought you did a good job. Me being a fan of pirates and of Rodney Atkins, I think this is a great song. I could ...

Okay so everyone else pointed out all the nitpicks I saw, but I'll tell you what I thought of it. I really liked it, I think you used a lot ...