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Re: Let Me Tell You A Story About Me....
hmmm this is very random...that's all I can say.
Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:59 am -
Re: A Little Creepy Poem
I loved this, I have no more word than that. I don't have anything to criticize so it makes this pointless, but I wanted you to know.
Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:50 am -
Re: Killing inside
I love this, but it was really short, and the ending had nothing to do with the rest of it. It didn't rhyme at all so it bothered me. I ...
Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:47 am -
Re: Little Death
I like this, I think it was stronger in the beginning first though. I think if you made the end better I would like it even more.
Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:40 am -
Re: Sturdy Tree
I sorta liked this, but it was a bit confusing. It didn't carry through the whole thing. It just kinda went off course. If you understand what i mean by ...
Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:00 pm -
Re: The Freed Verse.
I really like this and I feel the same way about poetry. If you just sit and edit all day is it really still your work? Anyway just thought I ...
Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:52 pm -
Re: Butterfly
I really like this, it is very deep. I think I like it so much because I can relate to this right now. I am in the same situation and ...
Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:27 pm -
Re: I never knew
Thank you for reviewing it for me I will work on that.
Sat Nov 28, 2009 4:46 pm -
Re: Weren't Meant To Be
I really like this and I understand it a lot. The only thing that I would say is that you need to cut down the long lines and maybe but ...
Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:51 pm -
Re: That I would be fine
I really liked this a lot and I can sympathize with how you feel. So the emotion must be in there haha. There isn't really anything that I can criticize.
Mon Nov 09, 2009 9:50 pm -
Re: soul-less blue eyes
I love this, I also have blue eyes and it gave me alot to think about. The only line I really didn't like is the last one. It just didnt ...
Fri Nov 06, 2009 12:54 pm -
Re: heart strings
I love it.
Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:56 pm -
Re: I never knew
Thank you so much I really needed that sobebomb. :)
Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:40 pm -
Re: norina's poem (i still miss you)
Love it! I really can't review what I love.
Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:53 pm -
Re: Cm punk song (you have to know him to understand)
He is really kind of annoying haha the way he thinks he is better than everybody.
Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:45 pm
