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Flower~Child

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Let Me Tell You A Story About Me....

    hmmm this is very random...that's all I can say.

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Little Creepy Poem

    I loved this, I have no more word than that. I don't have anything to criticize so it makes this pointless, but I wanted you to know.

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Killing inside

    I love this, but it was really short, and the ending had nothing to do with the rest of it. It didn't rhyme at all so it bothered me. I ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Little Death

    I like this, I think it was stronger in the beginning first though. I think if you made the end better I would like it even more.

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sturdy Tree

    I sorta liked this, but it was a bit confusing. It didn't carry through the whole thing. It just kinda went off course. If you understand what i mean by ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Freed Verse.

    I really like this and I feel the same way about poetry. If you just sit and edit all day is it really still your work? Anyway just thought I ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Butterfly

    I really like this, it is very deep. I think I like it so much because I can relate to this right now. I am in the same situation and ...

    Dec 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I never knew

    Thank you for reviewing it for me I will work on that.

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Weren't Meant To Be

    I really like this and I understand it a lot. The only thing that I would say is that you need to cut down the long lines and maybe but ...

    Nov 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That I would be fine

    I really liked this a lot and I can sympathize with how you feel. So the emotion must be in there haha. There isn't really anything that I can criticize.

    Nov 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: soul-less blue eyes

    I love this, I also have blue eyes and it gave me alot to think about. The only line I really didn't like is the last one. It just didnt ...

    Nov 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: heart strings

    I love it.

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I never knew

    Thank you so much I really needed that sobebomb. :)

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: norina's poem (i still miss you)

    Love it! I really can't review what I love.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Cm punk song (you have to know him to understand)

    He is really kind of annoying haha the way he thinks he is better than everybody.

    Nov 2, 2009


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