FlamingPhoenix

Your welcome!

Again thank you for the review. I love it that you are pointing out all the think that can be fixed. I am always open to criticism because I want ...

Thank you so much for the review! I agree this could have a little more, I'm just a little worried about giving away the plot a bit to soon, but ...

Awesome! 8)

Thank you so much! I just love your reviews they make me so happy when I read them. Also if there is ever a plot hole I would love it ...

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I really look forward to the next one!

Okay! Will do.

Your welcome! I look forward to seeing more for you two! :D

Your welcome! :D

Thank you!! Thank you!!!! So much for the wonderful review. I will fix the mistakes soon, I will read through to find others too, this was really helpful. I'm really ...

Thank you for the wonderful review Doss!

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Thank you for pointing out those silly mistakes Liberty, I always miss those. XD I will post again soon.

Thank you very much for the very crazy review Doss! It made me laugh, and I'm glad I managed to bring across what I wanted to in this chapter, so ...