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FlamingPhoenix

Conquest of Shadows ~ The Flames With In

  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: My Moon, Aeliana

    Hi my name is jessiebear and I am here to help improve your righting. I hope what I say will help you with your work. Okay lets start. Now there ...

    May 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The wooden box- chapter one

    Hi writerkitty your best friend is here to give you a great review on your new novel. I was quite shocked too see that you had stoped writing your other ...

    May 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Help And Support

    Hi my name is Jessiebear I noticed that you are new the site so I just want to say welcome. I do hope this site will help you with your ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth Chapter six; First day at the acadamy!

    Hi writer kitty I am very sorry that this review took so long. Anyway here I am giving you a great review. I do hope this review helps you like ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Search for the Ruby of Fire Chapter 35

    Hi Felistia I am here to give you a great review on your awesome chapter. I hope what I say is of some use to you and will help you ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Déjà Vu- Chapter 6

    Hi my name is jessiebear and I will be doing a review on your work. I hope what I say is help full if not and it is rood and ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lips

    Hi jessiebear here to do a review on your short story Ruby68. I hope what I say is help full to you if not pleas tell me. Any way I ...

    Jan 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth, Chapter three; Who on earth am I?

    Hi here to do another review on one of your work. Oh and it is me your friend. I do hope I can help you again with this chapter. If ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth- Chapter two; The weird dream

    Hi writer12345 your friend jessiebear here to do a review on your work just like you asked. sorry is took so long I was a little busy. I do hope ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth- Chapter one; Worst day ever.

    Wow I loved this chapter well done. I am really looking for word to reading chapter 2. There is one this that needs to be fixt those. you need to ...

    Jan 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Could Have Been

    Hi I loved this poem of yours. The riming is grate and the grammar is to. So I did not fined any thing wrong with this poem so I am ...

    Jan 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Secrets Prologue

    Hi Remy020 my name is jessiebear and I am here to do a short review on your prologue. I do hope what I say is help full to you. If ...

    Jan 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: That Dude, That Dude

    I just love this poem. The riming is perfect and it is very funny if you ask me. So I do hope you have a good day/ night. Oh and ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Something of Value

    Wow this is the best short story I have ever read Rishik. I don't get what you are saying about it being pathetic. I did think it was very funny. ...

    Jan 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Memories

    Hello Abhipsa I am here to tell you what I like about this poem. I just love the beginning bit if the poem were you tell us what the poem ...

    Jan 11, 2016


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