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Re: Unstoppable
Hi Shikora here with a review for you. I really liked the name of this poem it drew me in right away. I like how you've put so much emotion ...
Nov 3, 2018 -
Re: The Roof Top- first draft! please review so i know what to improve
Hi Shikora here with a review. Now I no you want a review to tell you what you need to fix, but to tell you the truth I didn't see ...
Nov 2, 2018 -
Re: the sands of time
Hi Shikora here with a review. This was a really nice poem. I really liked how you ran the lines together. It was a calm peaceful poem. I think this ...
Nov 2, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 8
Hi Shikora here with a review. I really liked this chapter. I felt like I was living Sarah's life in this chapter. I can defiantly say it needs improving, but ...
Nov 1, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 7
Hi Shikora here. I really like how this story is going. I can tell your getting into it a lot better now. This chapter was very different to the last ...
Oct 18, 2018 -
Re: transparency
Wow this was just a lovely poem. You have a real talent. This poem has so much emotion in it, and it is so true too. They way she lock ...
Oct 17, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 6
Hi Shikora here. I really liked reading this chapter. I like how it wasn't to long but not to short. I think you have nailed that really well. I like ...
Oct 16, 2018 -
Re: Unexpected
Wow this poem was just amazing. I could feel everything you were feeling when you wrote this. There is so much emotion in this poem, I loved the way you ...
Oct 16, 2018 -
Re: Thoughts in this Nutshell
Hi Shikora here. This was just a lovely poem. It was fulled with so much emotions, and I could feel the confusion this man has. I think this poem was ...
Oct 15, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 5
Hi Shikora here with yet another review. What I like This chapter was just great. It was full of so many questions through out. It was full of suspense and ...
Oct 13, 2018 -
Re: A House, but not a Home
Hi Shikora here with a short review @EagleFly and @alliyah. This was just a lovely peace. I just love the way it flows of my tong as i read. This ...
Oct 12, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 4
Hi Shikora here with a review. Wow this chapter did not end the way I thought it would. I was so shocked with the ending. “Time Turner, right?” he said ...
Oct 12, 2018 -
Re: Just Like This World
Hi Shikora here with a short review. I really liked this song it was very good. I think you should make more and post them. You have a very good ...
Oct 12, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 3
Hi Shikora here again with a review. What I like Okay so I read though this chapter and it was just as good as the last one maybe even better ...
Oct 12, 2018 -
Re: Deleted
Hi Shikora here with a review to help get your work out of the green room. What I like This chapter was off to a great start right from the ...
Oct 12, 2018