Fireweed

like xanthum gum said: aaww!! very sweet and clever. very origanal, too; you dont see alot of poems about postage stamps. nice work!!! :)

thank you!! ^__^

thank you!! ^__^

this is lovely. awesome imagery; i love the last stanza. i guess theres nothing to say that hasn't been said, but i thought this was a really beautiful and kind ...

beautiful. i like how you worded everything, and its very passionate. the only thing is, its a bit repitive since the structure of the stanzas are really similar. perhaps you ...

hmm... tis a good poem but i guess it doesnt seem very realistic to me. in the first stanza when you talk about ending your life, your tone seems a ...

no, i meant it to be that way... sometimes snow creates a soft, surreal, light and that seemed like a good way to word it.

Thanks guys!! perhaps i will continue it... or perhaps not... i dunno. i guess i like it short.

thanks alot, jane!! i'll capitalize those letters lickety- split!! anybody else?

nice rhyming and use of metaphor in this... i really like the phrase, "lies line her lips," thats powerful. its a little weird that you started the poem with the ...

hey thats catchy. :)

nice!! i really liked how it switched moods toward the end... the rhyme pattern was good but gets a little to sing-song in such a long poem... that didnt distract ...

holy crap, i didnt mean to post that twice!! sorry!!!! :) :) :) whoops...

COOLIO!! very well-written; the descriptions are awesome, but like snoink said, the plot gets a little drowned out because theres so much description... this was alot easier for me to ...

heh heh, cool. does it make sense to you, or is it just ramblings of complete and utter randomness?