Fireweed

i really like it... its so simple but it seems so meaningful and you have great descriptions... good job! :D

ya what does that mean?

Thanks for responding everybody! As for the title, I like the sea of grey and I like the blue danube waltz, but i think I'll go with the sea of ...

cool. it flows really well and i like the parentheses too.

Thanks! Any title suggestions, anyone?

what jennafina said :D

yai HOPE so :evil:

hey, sorry to butt in to this little debate, i know it doesnt concern me and should leave it to you guys, but think it is really rude and not ...

its intresting.. i think you have a good point, cuz what is beauty if everyone has a differnt idea of it? i dont really under stand the first line though

Thanx Jennafina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :frosty:

ya i know i used the word grey alot, but that was kinda the whole point, that the world seemed grey to her because she was so sad.Maybe i overdid ...

i really liked it. i dont think it has too much imagery at all; i think the imagery is great. its a bit choppy and confusing, but i think its ...

Wow...thats weird...but cool!!! i love the line "and to tease with the ease of the devil is a gift," though i dont really get it... but its still really cool. ...

thanks everybody, especially jennafina... psylynx, you confuse me!! easily for the last line, i originally wasnt going to put it, but my sister said the poem wasnt long enough or ...

COOL :thumb: