FireSpyGirl

Hi there! I like this chapter! Looking forward to more! So I only noticed a few mistakes and I'll jump right into them. first one: "Torches a line the walls ...

This is good! I really don't have any suggestions or anything to make. I do find a few lines a little awkward, but that is just me, and I don't ...

Hi there! I really like this poem! So I just noticed a few things, and I will jump right into them. First thing: "What kindle's above it's heart" I would ...

Hi there! Interesting poem! Very realistic and very relatable. This isn't going to be much of a review, because I only have one suggestion to offer. This line: "But the ...

Hi there! This is a good poem! I like how the simplicity just adds to the poem, without being to simple. I also love how this poem is very relatable. ...

Hi there! This is an amazing poem! The one really long line actually fits in really well, without breaking the rhythm up all that much. That is hard to do, ...

Another great chapter! This isn't going to be a real helpful review, as I didn't notice anything wrong! The ending made me laugh, which if that wasn't your intention, I'm ...

This is really good! I love how well you display the emotion, and how well the reader can relate to it. Especially me. I have never heard of an Acrostic ...

Hi there! This is really good! The reader can really get into this story, really feel who the characters are, etc. You describe everything really well, without being overly descriptive, ...

Hi there! So, uh, wow! This is a really good story, and really interesting! I like how you hit the line right between being too detailed, and yet not enough ...

Hi there!! I. Love. This! I can't wait for more! I would add a little more description. What did she see when she woke up? What was the campsite like? ...

Hi there! This is a good story! I really don't have all that much to offer, as this is really well written. The one thing I will point out is ...

Hi there! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. Awesome chapter! I liked it a lot, and I'm looking forward to more. There is one sentence that ...

Okay, I know I've already commented on this, but I will try to write a review. I'm trying to clean up the Green Room a little bit. :). On this ...

Hi there! I know it is late, but welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. So I am going to start off this review by telling you that ...