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Re: Win?
Hi, pony123! FireFox here! Welcome to YWS! Alright, on to the review. I will tell you in advance, I do somewhat of a "review sandwich," as some call it. I ...
Feb 7, 2014 -
Re: Change Starts With Action Chapters 1 and 2
Hey, there, Hsarver! FireFox here to review your piece, as requested in my WRFF thread! I hope you are having a marvelous day! Anyway, how my reviews typically work is ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Endless Summer
Hey, BadNarrator! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang, though there isn't much to review! This piece was damn near flawless! As with all ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Life- it's not rocket science!!
Hey, there, Usero! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Alright, I saw numerous grammar errors and some spelling errors, but I won't nitpick ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: REALLY Short Story- Soldier
Hey, there, FinalFreedom. FireFox here to review your short short story on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang. Alright, I understand that this was a story in which you were ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Revolution of Devils and Steel
Hey, avidav. FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Yes, that is our real name! Alright, I saw a few grammar and spelling errors ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Brain Collector
Hey, DukeofWonderland! FireFox here to review on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this piece! What a terrific writing prompt to have ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Brightest Night
Hey, there, Alfonso! FireFox here to review on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! To begin, I have to say: I love this piece! I think you did a fantastic ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Jammed
Hey, there, Jam! FireFox here reviewing on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! I must agree with Iggy and the previous comments that this would be better as a blog ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: If the World Could Only Love Me Chapter 1 Part 2/2
Hey, there, defyingravity! FireFox back again to review this other part of your piece! I love the part I already read, so decided to check this one out! Alright, as ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Revolution
Hey, there, therealme! FireFox here to review your poem on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our real name.) Okay, to tell you the truth, I typically ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Optimism and Our Country of America
Hey, there, Peanut! Fantastic essay! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! How are ya'? Needs Improvement: 1. Though I saw no spelling or ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Think.
Hey, dominusatramentum! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Untitled Novel-Prologue and Chapters 1-2
Hey, there, sbitonti! FireFox here to review on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. This is a given. We all go through the grueling work of ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Please Just Open the Door All the Way
Hey, there, SailerGirl! FireFox here to review on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang! Alright, so I have to admit that I am a tad bit confused as to the ...
Nov 24, 2013
