FerrumCorde

Thank you for your feedback, I only really have a few things to say, (perhaps to help you better understand a few things) first I am capable of something a ...

I feel like someone just punched my heart

I think this is missing some lines. It's really hard to review something so short because htere is barely anything to review. You seem to have gotten off to a ...

I have a question haha, how do you quote the sections/sentences/phrases and other word groups, the way you do? Ive seen it before but never asked. Thank you!

would you mind putting a link to the other poem? I'd like to read it if you don't mind

Dude, if you have not already, you needa show this to her!! Cause holy shit. I really love how you had heaven and hell, it makes you and your piece ...

Thank you, please feel free to read what I said about it on the bottom.

I also do not know what to call it, I replied to the bottom commenter, feel free to read what I said about it.

You didn't come off as rude at all!! lol I understand what you are saying, I wrote this when I was going through a lot of depression and I didn't ...

SO when are you publishing the next one? let me just say I have been loving this. Please continue to write this! It is really well done, despite some grammatical ...

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Wow I really liked this! Especially because it's a Dr.Who theme c: I saw a few things that would make it a bit better, I think one thing that stands ...

I wasn't a huge fan of your some of your suggestions due to lack of flow but I do like the "like happiness, he's barely around" and the suggestion to ...

Thank you, I will put more thought into that net time.

Thank you! I love your suggestion, I have severe readers block so rereading can be difficult. Besides, you are only helping me become a better writer, so thank you for ...