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Re: The Piano Is Black
I really. really love this poem! However, instead of doing my usual poetry review, I just want to say a few things: 1. I think this would be a lot ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Life Is A River
Hello Ian! Sis here for a review! Let's begin! I see Hadj mentioned punctuation and I agree. When I first started writing on this site people told me that I ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: A fire's dance.
Hey SecreteJournalist! Finally I can review! Alright, so I believe you know the drill....LET'S GO!! Cons: 1. Flames lick through the cracks of my home. Capturing my memories in one ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: S.A.M
Hey ddman! Sis here for that review I promised you! Okay, so I saw that Iggy pointed out some of the errors you made, and I only have a couple ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: And for that I love you.
Hey! Sis here for a review! Okay so, this was a really emotional piece. I can tell that you put emotion into this! So how I do this is pros ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: Frightening
Hey Strange! Sis here to review for you! Okay, I think I really only have one thing to suggest. The last line seems a bit....off. Rhythm and flow wise. Maybe ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Sunrise to Sunset, The Stick and Stone
Hello TJ! Sis here for a review! I don't know if you're familiar with the way I review poems so here's a quick overview. Okay, so I'm going to start ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: When one has lost everything....
Hey CcIsAwesome!! Sis her for a review! I have my poem reviewing style down, but I'm not quite sure how I'm going to do Short Stories yet so, let's just ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: How I Found Color
Hey Strange! Here to review this intriguing poem! So, I think I've reviewed for you before, but in case not, I'm going to go through a list of pros and ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Fishbowl.
Hey SecreteJournalist! I'm not sure if you're familiar with how I review poem so I usually go through a list of pros and cons, my favorite part, and then overall ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: How To Catch A Cold With A Butterfly Net
Hey fictional! I'm gonna give you a real quick review before I sign off for the night. Well, the rest of Review Day anyway. I noticed that @GreenTulip mentioned the ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Cowardly Lion
Hey cokeAcola! Sis here for a review! So, first off, I really liked how you described this story. It itself is unique, and that's what I love about it. Honestly, ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Just Another Face
Hello GreenTulip! As you seem to beat me at everything I go to review, I suppose I'll review a few of your poems so that way, I'll feel as though ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 3 - Dangerous Haven
Hey JackSkinner! Sis here to review for you on this fine review day! Okay, so when I review poem I usually do a list of pros and cons, but for ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Flakes
Hello AEChronicle! Here's a review for you, as promised! I prefer reviewing poetry, but I'll look at your other stuff just in case! Alright, so how I do this on ...
Jan 26, 2014
