Young Writers Society

Hey KillYouWithWords, Don't worry, I'm not gonna tear this apart. Why? Because I really like it. Usually I'd just make this a comment, but it's review day so I'm going ...

Hey Xregion, So I reviewed part four of your Anonymous Letter series. But, it's review day and I saw this only had two. So, FCS here with a review for ...

Hey Tronks, Ummmm, wow! FatCowsSis here to review for review day! Before I start, I want to say I was soooo not expecting that. Okay so overall it was really ...

Hey Gabriellemarice99, First of all, great poem. I love the imagery in it! The rhyming you used was almost perfect, and it was great overall. Okay, now suprisingly, I wasn't ...

Hey UnmarkedTerritory, So, usually I'd do a super long review, focusing stanza by stanza. But, it is review day, so I might come back and do a more detailed review ...

Hey AncientForever, Wow. Lot's of meaning and feeling in this poem. First of all, even though it's short, it's compelling. Also, the fact that it's so short makes it even ...

Hey MagPie94, First of all, great poem! It has a very emotional feel to it! It seems like you wrote it off of a personal expirience. I know how that ...

Hey Cheetah, Wow. You sooooo got my interest in this story. Okay, before I give tips or negative comments I want to say great job! I loved it! Alright, so ...

Hey, Wow. I'm not deaf, so I have no idea what it would be like. However, you made it pretty clear that looks on people's faces, their expressions, actions, and ...

Hey Camihall, I know you wrote this like, 3 years ago. But, it's a great poem. Only thing is, My broken heart seemed to repeat too much. I think it ...

Hey Moon, Wow. I think you captured the exact feeling that we all feel. Every day. I loved the poem. I don't think I have a negative comment. Punctuation was ...

Hey Emilie, Beautiful poem. The truth in it is so real. Okay, so I'm not going to try to be negative, but it seems like part of the poem rhymes, ...

Hey MagPie, First of all, this is a beautiful poem. I can relate to it, and I'm sure several others can as well. The only negatice remark I have is ...

Hey! Good job with the poem! It might just be me, but the poem seemed the slightest bit confusing to me. I'm going to start with the first stanza, and ...

Hmmm. This series of letters is very interesting. The idea you had in doing this is very creative. When Ariel is replying to her secret admirer, could you make it ...