Fantasyfreak14

thanks! I kinda had to rush the ending because of timing issues. :/ I submitted this for 4-H. but now that i've already submitted it, i'm sure i'll find some ...

thanks! I'll try to work on making it flow better.

thank you! :)

thank you! that makes me so happy to get a good comment! :)

thanks for the comments. oh, and don't worry, I'm not self harming. our teacher showed us a slideshow of different pictures and we had to write a poem based on ...

thanks for the comments. it was a villanelle, and according to my teacher in a villanelle the lines are supposed to repeat as much as they did. not exactly my ...

thanks for the input. then it probably would be a lot better. I know I could probably write it that way too, and there's definitely a lot of detail that ...

thanks! :D

oh, i didn't think the plot was at all like twilight...but wutev. i was only worried about Kale being too much like Edward or Carllisle. a friend told me tht ...

thanks! i had to write this at the last minute because i had to submit it for 4-H. facebook was part of the reason i wasn't finished with my project ...

wow. thanks so much. i was kind of worried about the twilight similarites, but i didn't have time to look them over and change them as I had to submit ...

I wanted to read this, but soon became absorbed in other fantasy series. What's it about?

I love this series! I just started Extras, but my friend says its not as good as the others. The one part towards the end of Specials almost made me ...

Thanks for the advice! It really helped. Looking at it again, now I see that it really does need some work. But, like I said in the description, it was ...

Thanks for the critique! I really needed some feedback on this one. There were several sections of this poem that I wasn't sure about, but I could't figure out how ...