FallWolf

Hola felistia =) It's FallWolf again, here to give you some advice =) I think I see where you're going here! It is a very descriptive, interesting piece, and I ...

Hola lizzybookclubqueen1 =) This is a really cool piece! I love how you go through the options and make sure that your reader knows what's going on. The ending is ...

Hola again felistia =) I'm trying out a new kind of critique, so you have to tell me if it's good or not =P Okay, so instead of focusing mainly ...

Hola felistia =) FallWolf here to give you a review (= I am enjoying this story very much =) The characters continue to mold their own personalities and habits, which ...

Hola ticktock123 =) FallWolf here with a short review for u! First off, this is a really good story with a deeper meaning than what meets the eye. The title ...

Hola MadWriter7 =) FallWolf here for a short review! This is a pretty good extension of the girl who boarded the train in the last chapter. I don't know if ...

Hola Jpwriter =) FallWolf here to give you some tips for your highly imaginative and unique work. Also, welcome to YWS! It's great that you've posted a story so quickly ...

Hola felistia =) FallWolf here to once more give you some tips and tricks for your writing. Once again you have written a very good chapter that I can enjoy ...

Hola chhlovebooks =) FallWolf here to (hopefully!) help u out First of all I just want to say, this is an awesome story! Your imagery is vivid and you really ...

Hola again felistia =) I'm here to give you some more tips and advice on your awesome dragon story. Okay, so a little bit of a nitpicky thing, the name ...

Hola again felistia! I'm back for another review =) Okay, I just want to say that this is waaaay better than the prologue! From the prologue I had thought that ...

Hola felistia, it's FallWolf here to give you a bit of friendly advice =) I have to say, I'm... not very hooked on the story. The only reasons for a ...

Hola RyharTopter =) FallWolf's here with a review 4 u. Alright, so this is one thing that is more about how your story looks: please turn your caps lock off! ...

Hola HolographicLadybug =) This sounds like it could turn into a very imaginative and cool story! Using Angeni as Spade's character foil is really interesting, as they are such complete ...

Hola cpthakur! This has a lot of good words in it, and the title is captivating, but I can not figure out what is going on immediately. Some readers love ...