FadeWriter

Comments and Corrections in Violet: Walking on the beach, a tall figure I see. (I know you're trying to be creative and figurative, but talking like Yoda is a bit ...

Whoa! That made my heart speed up at the ending! Very intense. I just have a few things to say. Corrections in violet: “Please. Don’t do this. You don’t need ...

This was I nice poem, but I'd just like to point out a few things. Corrections in violet: My dreams are filled of (Do you mean 'with'?) life and color ...

This was very good, it reminded me almost of a soap opera . I could really read this poem if you know what I mean. The way you wrote it ...

This was very emotional and very deep. I for one loved how raw it was and how you really gave us a feel for your poor character. There were a ...

I really think it has good intentions, but you started of on a wierd page. You said you were the one torn but the other person's is whole, but the ...

Geez, for being so short I didn't know it'd have such a Great impact! I agree with the person above me: Simple, short, and tells a story ! It had ...

I'm sorry I can't offer you a good feed-back or a even a critque, but I am Speechless ! This was amazing. I don't even know what else to rather ...

You definitly got me excited for this story! It sounds good, I love to read this when you do post it. The only thing I wanted to say was this ...

Wow, I like the messege a lot, very relatable! But I just have one thing, it doesn't really flow. I know you are trying to rhyme, but something just isn't ...

I can see what you were trying to do, but I didn't really understand it too well. It wasn't very clear, I'll try and clarify: Lies did fall from your ...