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Very intriguing poem! The format of it draws me and confuses me a bit. It's not traditional, but I support the deviation from the norm. It makes this feel like ...

Hello, great story you got here! I loved the final lines, "It wasn't because she feared death it was because she wanted to die; and that scared her." Powerful stuff! ...

This is the cutest poem. It really made me feel something in my cold, dead heart for once. You have a very honest form to this poem, and the organization ...

Wow! What a story! This is a huge short story which is something to applaude yourself on. I really loved the imagery of this story. From the “acorn eyes”, to ...

This is a nice poem, and while I don’t want to critize your creativity or ideas in explaining your depression, I do want to say that I feel this poem ...

Great and powerful poem! The diction used here is strong and on point with your message. Struggling with finding faith and truth in one’s life is a rite of passage ...

Hello there! It's hard to critic poetry because it can be so abstract, but I do have to say that this is a very dynamic piece. I can really feel ...

First off, this is a great story! You do a very good job of portraying the love our narrator had for his Serah. It was easy to get a feel ...

This is a pretty powerful poem. I know that just giving compliments doesn't help writers much, but this poem just works in its pure, simpler form. The thing about this ...

It is a peculiar but very enjoyable poem. I like its simplicity and how the stanzas are arranged. This poem is thought-provoking, making the reader look inside to question love. ...

This is a great story! It has a powerful meaning of hope that can come from your friends and the people around you. I really loved the powerful imagery you ...

Dark poems, especially those that are about mental illness, resonate with me. I have suffered and I feel that this is a deeply personal poem that readers can relate to. ...

I find that this piece has a strong message that although overused, is properly displayed throughout. I loved the personification that was used throughout as well. I believe that good ...

I found this chapter to be pretty enticing. It provides enough mystery to make readers keep reading to find the answers, such as, who are these characters, what is their ...