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FabihaNeera

FabihaNeera

  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Love Conquers

    Your welcome :)

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When the sun rises

    Thanks!

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When the sun rises

    Thank you so much! I will consider all the feedback :)

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When the sun rises

    Thank you! I will take your advice about the line breaks :)

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When the sun rises

    Thank you! I also get really confused for why the formatting never works out when I'm trying to break the poem into stanzas... but thanks for letting me know! I ...

    Apr 29, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Still my favorite ride

    Thanks for the review! I realize that there's a lot of details I left out... so thanks for pointing them out. For the smile, it could appear as the MC ...

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Still my favorite ride

    Hello, thanks for the review! :D

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Try

    You're welcome! :)

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Foolishnesses

    Hello, This is really well-written! I like the whole idea of the story with this beautiful view from a rooftop entrancing these friends. You wrote about two nice concepts of ...

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: paradox of kindness

    :D

    Apr 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: xavier

    :D

    Apr 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Night I Met My Love

    :)

    Apr 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Trip Down Memory Lane

    You're welcome: D

    Apr 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: A Wish

    You're welcome :))

    Apr 23, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: body

    Ohh I see... sorry if that's a common phrase.. I didn't really know what that meant. But great job anyway :)

    Apr 22, 2019


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud