Explosive_Pen

Oh. My. God. This is win. I am literally disolved into a puddle of giggles on the floor. When I read the title, I was like, "Yeah, this should be ...

Oh my God. Such horrid grammar. I feel a compulsive need to capitalize all those i's, add commas and semicoloms and, well, other Punctuation Beasts. And yeah, it's not the ...

*Ahem* Repetition is... not good. Try something like: "I hate the way that your eyes shine, And look right through me to read my mind. And the smell of your ...

I have many owners— Most are young, few are old, And the scary thing is: They all have the same goal They push me around, And cause me great stress ...

Ah, the 90s. Bill Clinton was President, no Georgey the Bush, no stupid, pointless wars... Ah, those were the days. Pokemon, being pre-five-years-old. My God, those were such simpler times. ...

"The murderer leaves the room, the door swings close softly, and their victim gasps, gulping up their last, precious breaths. There is no drop of blood on the sheets or ...

Hi Rosey! I’ve spread my wings, I’m ready to fly, Why must you stop me one more time, I think a semicolon would work better here. To say goodbye? Do ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. So my critiques will be in bold, 'kay? Sometimes I wish I could just melt away. Burning water doesn't help. Yet here I am, with thoughsands ...

Oh, is this a fanfic of the Warriors series? Gosh, I haven't read those books in forever. "He tried to word" I think you meant the word, right? This was ...

I loved your rhythm. God, I wish my poetry had rhythm like that. I suck at rhythm. I agree with nixonblitzen that nothing really changed in your poem, and it ...

The repetition of "Dear you" actually works in this poem. Congrats on pulling it off! Like tennisprincess said, some lines were a lot stronger than the others, so maybe figure ...

Oh my God, this is so creepy. Eliza's my name! So I got a little freaked when I read the first paragraph, hah. And oh my good golly gosh, I ...

Hi June! I loved the message of this poem; like it tells you what the important things in life are and whatnot. But you tell this instead of showing it. ...

Oh, this is one of those diamond poems! You don't see too many of these anymore. Points for creativity! I really liked this poem because it perfectly described a star, ...

Oh, this poem is so cute! From the point of view of a welcome mat that you put at the door, right? I love it. Let's see if I can ...