Evi

Break through all barriers, Cut through [s]those[/s] the chains; 'those' makes it sound like a work-out commercial. You know? Like..."Lift those legs, ladies! Do those squats! :D Stand between anger, ...

Hmm. Yeah, this is really short. And, at the beginning with the texting, I thought you had just suddenly decided to abandon proper spelling, capitalization, and grammar. Until I realized ...

So many lives among us, Living in love, hate, and complexity. Not to say that life is black and white, But when you look, can you see more? This is ...

Hmph. You've got a lot of learning to do, missy. First of all-- have a good, long look at our rules here. We've got Greeters (those friendly people whose names ...

Okey Dokey, I'm Evi and I shall be your reviewer. First of all, I liked this. Really, I did. But this is going to sound harsh anyway. I looked around ...

:D As a poem, I would have to tear it apart, piece by piece, and break your heart. But... As lyrics, I would not. I would think it was very ...

Hey, Clueless! That's weird to say. Anyway, I thought this was nice. It's slightly cliched; broken and despaired turns into renewing happiness and hope. Either way, this was nice. It ...

Wow! This was really good! I'm surprised nobody has comented on this yet. So, as a whole, I really enjoyed this. When I'm writing an action scene, a lot of ...

What in tarnation?! :shock: I think you're either terribly confused, or lacking imagination at the moment. If it's the former, then I suspect you either meant to post a lot ...

Hmm. Not being sure quite how to review something like this, I'll just give you some quick feedback. I thought it was well-written; you come across as somebody who has ...

Ha. Brilliant. The whole time, I kept thinking, "OMG, this is going to be so deep, it's about rape and I'm feeling my heart being wrenched out for this poor ...

Hey Wiseman! Thought that Narrative Poetry is an underappreciated forum and decided to review yours. I like it a lot, expecially how it sorta rhymes very subtlely. At the beginning, ...

Hmmm. The darkness came, passed and went away stealing not second of my light today. Stealing not a second? Or stealing not second s ? Anyway, so far I'm understanding ...

Ahhhhhhh!!!!!! I'm so terribly sorry, but I absolutely loved this. :smt045 The rhyming was so effortless, and you even managed to characterize a narrator we only know for 13 lines ...

Hello! This is the poem you mentioned to me, and I thought it was written very well. As you'll notice, I have no idea about the technical aspects of poetry, ...