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Re: S.P. 1.1
Ouch! That hurt! I addressed the pain in my right wrist, not knowing what it was, but desperate for it to stop. My left hand automatically found the source, even ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Be Not Afraid
Hi Mars! Thanks for using my Examination Emporium thread! :arrow: No need to fear, the deadline isn't until March 21! That's tons of editing time. :wink: :arrow: My main issure ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: .....Forget me not
'Ello, Sincerely, I'm Evi! You've already gotten some nice reviews from June and Kat, but I'll give you another one just for good measure. :D I can't see your star ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: This Rose I Give
*Evi alert* Hey Knightly Angel! I'd call you Angel, but it seems we already have so many Angels on here. Plus, Knightly makes you sound that much more impressive! Okay, ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Tree.
I'm surprised neither of the other reviewers commented on the irony! :P Here we have a tree, which supposedy cannot think, writing a quite thoughtful and deep poem about not ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (3)
Hey again, Sela! I'm glad you didn't ask for nit-picks, because I couldn't find any! *epic gasp* Shoking, I know, but it was obvious that you read this a good ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Shine Bright, Little Baby
Oh, love, this was so sweet! I just smiled as I read it. Just smiled. In truth, I'm just glad to find a well-written, emotion-filled poem that's happy . Our ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue
Dear, you posted in at least nineteen different 'Will Review for Food' threads. Although I'm not sure if there's a concrete rule for this, it slightly irritates me and I'm ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Without You. *Edited.*
Ta, I'm Evi and I am here to [s]shred[/s] critique your story! Hehe. Totally kidding. That morning started out as any other morning. I woke up in the cot my ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: The Marble Horse: Chapter One
Chapter One “Isn’t it beautiful?” Mom’s voice was airy as she gazed at the old mansion standing in front of us, [s]her lungs[/s] gasping for breath after the long, slow ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Shattered Glass
Hey Sanareth, I'm Evi and welcome to YWS! Just for future reference, this is a little bit long. Just a little, but still, a lot of times people are discouraged ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Still Life
Hi, Gahks, I'm Evi! :D :arrow: First of all, I can see why you wanted us to see this in its center-justified layout; something about seeing the evenness (is that ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Heartache Blows Youth Away
ties from burgundy carpet rugs my back is burnt just as bad (Just as bad as what? That phrase only works if there's something to compare it to right before) ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Stairs
*Evi alert* Hey anti-pop! Here as requested. I see that you shall be my competition for Clo's Monster Mash? :twisted: Bring it. You're going down. Hehe. Just kidding. So, normally ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: No longer
I do not want to linguer anymore. Unless your country spell it differently than mine, I belive the proper spelling is 'linger'. I'll lay myself on the floor And I'll ...
Feb 8, 2009
