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Re: Eterne (1)
Hey Blink, nice to meet you! I'm not sure if we've been introduced yet? I'm Evi. :lol: ‘Let me out.’ The boy is swollen in fear. The winter rolls into ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: I havent thought up a name yet
Hey Caroline! Congratulations for posting your very first piece on YWS! :D I'm going to do a pretty in-depth review, dear, and it might seem a bit harsh, but I'm ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: Meant to be heard (reworked)
No promises to strap us down, no words to bind the free, he tricks us all to believe we can get away easily. Love this poem so far, Anna! I ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part II
Hey Winter! Thanks for using my review thread, dear. I love Historical Fiction! :D Alright, so your grammar is superb! That leaves me with a lot less things to have ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Is this not love?
Hey Whispers! Love the username, by the way. And welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* You have no idea how much I love short poems, dear. :wink: It means I can ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Memories Fade
Hello Stoney, I think I reviewed something of yours earlier? Anyway, I'm here to take a look at your lovely poem. ^_^ My mind drifts into hollow places Dark. secluded. ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: These Eyes of Mine
These eyes of mine can see, Even the small insignificant. But who am I for me to be, Lord God since whence? Hmmm...quite confuzing, I must say. I think that ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: A collection of poetry
Kirsten! It is not at all evil for you to request another review; that's what my thread is for. :wink: Feed not on thy soul; For thy soul follows not ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Vashoa's Life
Vashoa stared out over the large space, empty, [nix this comma, dear] except for some shrubs and rivers she called home. She had lived on the prairies of South Dakota ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Reasons to Move (1)
Clo! Thank you for using my thread, dear. ^_^ So, I love your opening sentence. Deaths are, as much as we might hesitate to admit, some of the best ways ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Dancer
*Evi alert* *puts on reviewer cape and swooshes in dramatically to review the heck out of poem* :shock: Awww. Youu didn't warn me that the poor girl would die ! ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Mary, The Obedience Fairy - [Part One]
Hey Poppity! I am so not here to review your story. Why would you think that? I simply refuse, and nothing you do could possibly change my mind. Uh-uh. No ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Fake, or Real?
One of my fellow younger members on the site! *high five* Dear, as Prok already emphasized, please do keep writing, and no, you are not too young for YWS! I'm ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Sparrows.
Aww, Kirsten, good for you to write something again! And...well...that does seem like a lack of confidence. But, I'm sure you'll get your writing mojo back, dear. :wink: Removed The ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Books for Boys
Hey, dear, I'm so terribly sorry that I couldn't get to this quicker, but the war basically consumed all of my time. :( I hope I'm not too late? I ...
Mar 9, 2009
