Evander

Heyo! I have a bit more time this review and my head is a bit clearer, so hopefully I'll be able to expand upon my last review in a more ...

Hey, Songmorning! I apologize if this review turns out to be a bit rambly. I was interrupted halfway through and lost my train of thought. I'm not sure if I ...

Hey, Ice! I'm here with a quick review. I believe I've read the fourth chapter, but that was awhile back. Feel free to disregard some of this advice mentioned here. ...

Heyo, Holo! I'm back with another review! First big thing: the chapter titles are getting a little long and unnecessary in some places? While it does certainly add character to ...

Hey, Holo! I'm here with another review! This chapter is where parts of Bethany's scariness is at least shown a bit more! When Bethany started to talk, everyone instantly calmed ...

Hey, Holographic! I'm back here with another review. All in all, this chapter was pretty short. Which isn't really a big deal, it just means that's a bit more difficult ...

Hey, Songmorning! Back here with another review. Aw, the ending to this chapter was cute! Jiminy's pep talk to Kaelin was actually really sweet and the kind of thing that ...

Heyo! I'm here for a quick review. I've skimmed through all of the others, so I have a good sense of what's going on. Feel free to disregard some feedback ...

Hey, r4! Adrian here with a review. I gotta admit, I've only read the first few chapters and that was a while ago, so I apologize if not everything in ...

Hey, Songmorning! I'm back with another review. Maybe I'm a bit wrong here -- or maybe it's because magic works differently in that world -- but there are a lot ...

Hey, Artemis! As I said in an earlier review, I've only read chapters here and there so let me know if some of the things in these reviews don't apply ...

Hello! I'm here for a quick review. One thing that I'd like to note is don't be afraid to expand upon points and go into detail on the specifics inside ...

Hey, Artemis! I've read bits and pieces of your work here and there, but I haven't read it all the way through. So I apologize in advance if some of ...

Hey! I'm here for a review. I really did enjoy reading this. It got straight to the point, the dialogue was compelling, and everything included in this chapter was necessary ...

Hey! I'm back with another review! I'm not sure if you notice this, but the beginning to each chapter is like a recap to an episode or a scene that ...