Evander

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Hi, I am going to edit your Poem! Here we go.... *Excuse me, for I am having suicidal thoughts. I imagine myself and my body, beautifully rot. A coarse, bound ...

Hi, I'm going to edit your poem. Here we go... *My treacherous life had yet again left me with no answer. A tear begins to form at the back of ...

Hi, I am going to edit your poem. :) Here we go... *You say your cool, but yet your not. You call me ugly, your heart deprived. No one to ...

Hi, I am going to edit your story, here we go.... *Hello my name is, well... no one took the time to name me. But we have found temporary names, ...

Hi, I am going to edit your story, what you read below it my editing. Okay here we go... *I live in an apartment building alone, but completely alone since ...

Hi, What I'm going to do is fix your mistakes using *. So here we go.... "*It's* *February* the fourteenth, *Valentine's* day, just smiley faces, and hearts flying away. *The* ...

Hi, I like your poem, but there was a few things that bother me. "loving, hating and missing u" The beginning of the title is supposed to be capitalized. Also ...

Hi, My dad is dyslexic so I understand most of your mistakes. I am going to point out your mistakes and fix them using *. So hear we go... "*Hello* ...

Hey, First of all... I love it! It makes the reader think about this world, and most of the stories they've read. "then, aree you so perfect?" Uh I hope ...

Raven here, I felt kind of lost reading this poem. This would be easier to read, if you added a bit more detail. Then the end caught me off guard, ...

Hi Raven here, *“get away! Monster!”* I am pretty sure that the *get* in "get away" is supposed to be capitalized. *I told her before darkness.* I would prefer 'I ...