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Hey, Dogsrule! Adrian here for a review, as requested! So I'm just going to dive straight into the nitpicks and critique. While there are tens of wars going on at ...

Hey, Wolfe. Have fun trying to understand my thought process! Luke as a character seems likable enough. They way he thinks differs from Kyle in a way that it's easy ...

Yo, Wolfe. Adrian here to review this chapter for Review Day. I preferred shadows when they didn’t try to kill me. Can I just say that I love that first ...

Hey, Lau! I happen to enjoy fanfics very much, so this was a pleasant read. It set up an opportunity for an interesting spin on things. It looks like it ...

Hey, James! This has some promise. Plane crashes, Bermuda Triangle, a cliff hanger. It really started off with a bang, which is good for an action / adventure story. It ...

Salutations, Ashley. The beginning has been used before and honestly dull -- perhaps a good word to use here is cliche. Waking up scenes are very common and just plain ...

Hello, isham101. One of the things I must say about this from first glance is that it is very long. Almost too long to read. 36000+ words is too much ...

Hey, Em! This piece is actually fairly difficult to review. While humorous, it also is confusing. Though, it seems like most of the humor comes from it being confusing. Which ...

Salutations, Noelle! Adrian is back for another review! This time gap is actually pretty small compared to the others. “We told her, okay," Sam spat. "She knows.” Rhys’s laugh echoed ...

Hey, Tiyu. Welcome to YWS! This poem was an interesting read, and I was thoroughly entertained the whole time. It had this beat to it that kept my head bopping, ...

Hey, Noelle! Back here for another review. from the others incase they had to leave at a moments notice. ‘Incase’ should be ‘in case’. Then ‘moments’ should be ‘moment’s’, because ...

Hey, Noelle! Adrian is back for another review in a timely manner. (I mean, within a week? That has to be some sort of record.) This chapter is good. There's ...

Hey, Noelle! I am here to review, and I'm actually early. (I said in an eon, right? Or was it a millennia? Anyway, it's only been a month or so, ...

Hey, Dogsrule! Finally, the next chapter is out. Let's start the review, shall we? :D The beginning really bothers me. It feels like this novel has lost its whole setting. ...

Hey, Noelle! Adrian here for a review. Yeah, so sorry I haven't done this before. Life has been life, and the internet has been really distracting. Nevertheless, I shall attempt ...