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Re: The Dust of Worlds:Chapter Two
I changed the planet because we've sent out probes and taken photographs of mars, and found no evidence of life. I think it would be a little more practical for ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Two
Thanks! A new post is coming soon on mine, so keep your eyes peeled.
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Five: A new threat
well, I'm not sure yet...probably.
Oct 5, 2015 - Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Five: A new threat Oct 5, 2015
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Re: The Revolution Begins
Great job! This is very interesting, I cant wait to read more! I got a little confused when you said they all shared the same body, but they were seperate. ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Paper Planes (Ch1)
oh. embarrassed....
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Return of Magic Part One Capter Four:A Street Performance Goes Horribly Wrong pt. Two
alright, ive fixed my paragraph breaks and will fix up the issue of everyone being oblivious to the fact that Casey hit some lady with a blunt instrument tomorrow. (Avalon's ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: What is Love?
Heyah! This is TheFantasy14! And since you're pretty new, welcome to the site! I really love the spirituality of your story, David's faith is especially strong and I, being a ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Return of Magic Part One Capter Four:A Street Performance Goes Horribly Wrong pt. Two
I think you have the wrong story. Who's sage....
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Return of Magic Part One Capter Four:A Street Performance Goes Horribly Wrong pt. Two
Wow! Thanks!
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
hey! TheFantasy14 here for a reveiw! This was great. I'm liking Josh more and more, and I'm interested to know more about Jim. I think it flowed very well and ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Lines of Faith: Chapter 1
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Sep 14, 2015
Hey there! This is a review from TheFantasy14! I really thought this was very interesting. The detail was great, I flowed fairly well, and your characters seem realistic and, most ... -
Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Three: Explanations and Complications
Dude, I just wanna say you're great. You're so helpfull and I really appreciate what you're doing. Maybe when I'm done with this prodject we should write something together. Also, ...
Sep 12, 2015 -
Re: The Waiting Game
Thanks! If you want to check out my stuff, it's in the books section under fantasy. Just look for Return of Magic.
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Two: Sudden Magic
Thanks! I certainly will make some changed and let you know when my next installment comes around
Sep 7, 2015
