Esmé

Lotti, Welcome to YWS. It’s a wonderfully addictive site ^_^. Anyway, your critique, since this is what we post stories for, no? First of all, Kaylyn said some very useful ...

Rowan, Wow. Twenty six chapters? I’ve never made it that far… But, I will, I really will… *mutters under breath. Anyway, your book. ^^ Let’s continue, yes? *** Quote: It ...

Hello, My name’s Esme, and I’ll be your critiquer (: No, I haven’t read the previous installments, but the pre-chapter info was really helpful! Anyway, here’s my critique. I did ...

Hey, This piece caught my eye me in the first place because the name “Magda” pops up in my story, also. So of course I was interested what someone else ...

Ashley - took me a while, but here I am. As always, I read it almost as soon as you posted, but you’re reading the words of a hopelessly lazy ...

Wiseman - Hello, there ^_^ I’ll give you a general review, seeing the nitpicks have been pointed out by the reviewer above, and not yet taken care of. And they ...

KJ - As you know, I’m not a very big fan of werewolves, but I did promise you this crit (: I’ll try not to let my general prejudices make ...

Icaruss - I did read this before, but was just too lazy to write a crit ^_^ Now I’m here, though, and apologizing for the delay. You’ll get the line ...

Gyrfalcon - chapter two! *squeals. Quote: Tannar, clambering out of the wagon behind her, glanced around the courtyard with one eyebrow cocked, as if thinking “this is it?” ^_^ Quote: ...

gyrfalcon - I think I did read this before, and that I found it as awesome as I do now ^_^ You should definitely try to get this published, or ...

Kagerou, Hello, Esme on this side - obviously. Anyway, as usual with my reviews, you’ll have to wade through any nitpicks I might have before getting to my impressions, and/or ...

Well, finally, after a very, very long delay, I wrote the critique. I mean, the chapter was read almost as soon as it was out, but finals were killing me, ...

Ashley - Here’s my critique for Ch 7. I confess, I read it some time ago, but was very, very lazy lately, and so you get it now, not that ...

BigBadBear - So I finally got around to critiquing this… Sorry for the wait, but finals were murdering me ^_^ Quote: Not here you can’t. Yes, yes, dialogue, I know, ...

Bittersweet , Sorry, sorry, sorry for me taking so long to critique this, especially since I read it ages ago. Or rather, I did review it earlier (a few days ...