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I understand your thoughts on how he shouldn't speak to the reader, but this character has formed into what most call sarcastic, he talks as if someone is actually listening. ...

Thanks I fixed it!

Thanks I fixed it!

I do explain more in the second chapter, and it gives more of the senses as well.

:) happy XD :D

My friend Mila crush can't love her because he said so she asked me to write this

you can't do this to me! is there more? If not write more..... now would be nice

In the line you are confused about you actually got the idea. I really didn't expect anyone to it was confusing for the first few people who read it besides ...

In the line you are confused about you actually got the idea. I really didn't expect anyone to it was confusing for the first few people who read it besides ...

In the line you are confused about you actually got the idea. I really didn't expect anyone to it was confusing for the first few people who read it besides ...

Thanks :)

thats just great. im laughing so hard i might pee..... ha ha ha ha

I enjoy your work. It inspired me to write more poetry. I liked it but it would be nice if it had more detail. I was wondering if you could ...

I got kind of lost with the note too it's just hard to find the right words. Only 14 though I'll get better.

Thanks