EnchantressMuffin

This was good. She obviously meant a lot to you, and your friend as well. I'm really sorry that she died; it's always a tragedy. I hope your friend feels ...

I liked this! I wasn't sure about it from the first stanza, but it really captured me about halfway through the second. It was very lyrical, and the flow was ...

This was good - really interesting. I liked it. It didn't really seem like much of a poem to me, maybe because it had stanzas like paragraphs. I don't know... ...

I read your piece, "Ode To Burnt Toast", and I liked it so much that I figured that all your poetry much be awesome. So, when I saw this, I ...

This was pretty good. It was indeed cute, but it lost the rhythm after the first stanza - which I really liked, by the way; points to you - and ...

This is kind of lame... Doesn't have any lasting quality, no particular rhythm (Rigel's version is excellent, though, rhythm-wise; it really adds a lot and it's a great read), and ...

I like the first two stanzas - the rhymes were really good, seemingly effortless - but the last two lines seemed kind of weak compared to the rest. I can't ...

You know, I really do like this. It's got a sort of simple, charming appeal that makes for a fun read. I like the stories that could be behind this; ...

Okay. I really like this; I think it may have been your best yet. Definitely my favorite. Critique-wise, there's not much to say... I didn't think that any of the ...

This was wicked nifty. I laughed through the whole thing, but my favorite bit was this: Will this toast escape detection if it is masked by these confections? Through the ...

This was a good idea, but I didn't really like it that much. I thought it was a little dull, a little dry, and not the most satisfying internet poem ...

I like this. The idea may be elderly, but it was still a really nice poem, very cute. Just the first line made me think, "Oh, this could be really ...

I really like this. The rhymes are excellent, the subject matter is clever and intriguing, and I just basically love it. Great, fantastic job. :) Peace, love, chocolate. Muffin

I didn't like this. The whole thing seemed amateurish and nonsensical, and many parts of it didn't make much sense at all. Take the first stanza. "There is no man! ...

This was really... weird. Weird and unsatisfying. Now, writing about a video game can be a bad or good thing. It's not the sort of thing that you see every ...