Emorykings

***clapping*** That was great I enjoyed it, it has been a long time since i've seen a poem with such intense comparison. You use of this personification amuse me especially ...

your poem was lovely I enjoyed the deep expression of feelings its difficult to express onces feeling in writing but I think this poem has something to do with what ...

tha was a great poem I enjoyed reading it your use of words your puntuations and the sense of self pity of the poetic character was great you did a ...

Your spacing is irregular and not needed. but in all this is how I feel your poem should look like hope you find it useful. An angel should be happy, ...

Thats quit an interesting poem I love your use of words except for the unecessary repetion. Also this line "..you're so close, yet I can't touch your heart. I wish ...

This is how I think the poem should be maybe its just me. You and I, we're like a centipede We share our eyes, ears, hands and feet This makes ...

Am not much into grammatical error thing but mostly theme and I think the general theme of this poem of yours was intresting the whole holding back even when the ...

Its a nice poem I loved reading it as was stated ealier it sure needs comma and also there are some little stuff I saw that maybe you might want ...

You did a great job with your poem. But the are some things you should consider. Firstly there were words that were unecessary and the lines didn't fit. And this ...

I enjoy reading through this poem of yours though it was rather short. But the thing i do not understand is your use of pebble in your first expression. Pebble ...

I love your poem it was beautiful, but i do see how, "I can't protect, resist, defend for the cyclone likes to rip out hearts." relates to the rest of ...

Hair beautifully black As a night at sea; Skin, pearl white, Like the froth of a majestic wave. Your walk so gallant And proud; Your stride so stunning, And your ...