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In bed; alone. Silently, I weep, and the pain slowly lolls me to sleep. I think that this description is my favorite in this poem :) Because everybody's already critisised ...

Ha ha ha ;) the title drew me to this :D I like it! It's real' good - it reminds me of a kind of childhood myth or something; like ...

This is for school, right? :) This is very, very mature and by the looks of this, you're obviously very articulate which is something that I'm envious of :D I ...

HAHAHA. Yo! You, my friend, are awesome... :) I just totally wanted to say that this 'lil think was real' cool to read :D Xx

I just wanted to say that this is fantastic, and I really enjoyed reading this ;) You've kind of inspired me, too. I love the way this is written; using ...

This speaks loudly :) It is really mature and yet, you've managed to make it still really full of emotion. I just love emotional poems :D So, yep. Use of ...

Wow, this was an amazing poem and I love things like this. About mystical, mysterious people... I loved reading this. I loved the flow. The title is real' nice and ...

I enjoyed reading this immensly :D Good collection of imagery. And I mean, really good :) I found it hard to grasp the meaning of this poem, but with me, ...

This is good, and I'm sure your teacher will think this is awesome :D But... to me, I can't REALLY feel anything... I just see a jumble of adjectives. It's ...

Ha! The end part is awesome :D And this poem... it made me feel sick. Is that the effect you were going for? :) And the way you'd described everything ...

This is a really inventive little thing! :D When I read this, I could feel, what was going on, too... This whole descriptive little emotional piece of writing was truly ...

This is good! :D I really liked reading this. It's nice to read, descriptive, infromative... :) There are tons of spelling mistakes though: drakness - darkness phantomes - phantoms lisntening ...

This is good! :) You definately DO NOT lack description and descriptive words :D I espeially liked the first part, where you are describing the boarding school. I could almost ...

This is... good :) Yes. Simple, but good. I mean, it's a really good idea; really imaginative, good thinking, with thinking of "being cheated on" as a place; a bad ...

I can't really think of anything to say on this; it's short, okay, but it's just fantastic :D The title of your poem really drew me to this; I was ...