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Re: Hide and Seek: The Child
Wow! I think I know where you got the idea from. Though it might not of shown on your T.V. It was about how a baby is made in a ...
Apr 19, 2005 -
Re: The Cultin Crew
If you cant understand the scottish languge you must be daft. :D Well.. Okay you might not.. But sometimes the scottish slang makes it easier to sing. :D Go scotland! ...
Apr 17, 2005 -
Re: The Star Spangled Banner
I thought it was very good. Though I can see its not Incandescence's type of story. The story was very confusing to read and I didn't really know what I ...
Apr 15, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and dust 9 - forest (part 2)
Awww why they no kiss properly? Im loving it! Sorry I didn't reply earlier, I was away and had no computer for three days! :( :P
Apr 11, 2005 -
Re: Act One Elementary Memories COMPLETED
I read it and found interesting facts about rainbows! :P And how come the person called Rachel is telling the story from her point of view but it was from ...
Apr 6, 2005 -
Re: The Friend
Nice, did you kill your friend? Meanie! It was good, though something isn't right about it. I think the others might think that to, and if they do then they ...
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: Day & Night very lame but i had a go
It was good, though it would be better in stanzas. Oh yer, first time ever! I spot a spelling mistake.. Again, unless it means something. Despratly should be desperately unless ...
Mar 16, 2005 -
Re: four things that never happened to Grace Hampton
Its very good, though why isn't any one else looking at it? Its just great! Though some of it I found sad, which really made me feel for those characters, ...
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: The mental paitent (revised)
Wow, its almost the same. Though you have to cut down on sending all of these stories in the one go, other people aren't getting anything said about them, as ...
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: Surgeon Insurgent: A Modern Skit
Okay, its like a important matter and you tried to turn it to make it funny. The problem is that I think you took it to far and the ending ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: The Taming of The Shrub
It is very good, though you have left out two main inporant things. 1st: You must tell us who the characters are and tell the reader a bit about them. ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: the mental patient
Try reading ma rachel stories, people did feel that she was crazy. If you go back like two, three pages you will find some. :D P.s Its about a crazy ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and Dust
Wow, its just as good as your other ones! I really need to read more of this! Its, how can I put it.... WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW. (To others who think I am ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: Over 13: Sunday, February 13, 2005
Sorry, but I didnt get this... I never get anything though.... Its very good! Good use of languge! 'fuck' and others. Are you able to put up a parental sign ...
Feb 14, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and Dust 1 - the beginning
kool! Just as good as your last one! Just a few typos 'A Smiled' I think should be 'I smiled' And near the beginning you had it past tense then ...
Feb 14, 2005