Emivanz1

Thank you so much for all of your suggestions!

Thank you so much for the review. The line, "No one's her to fix it" was supposed to be sort of the climax of the poem, the loudest point. so ...

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Thanks so much for the review! btw the reason you think of peppermints with the name is because it is a tic tak flavor. I was stuck on a last ...

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Thanks so much for the review! it was very helpful and i will definitely take in these points

hank you so much for the review! i agree, some punctuation would have made a big difference in the flow of the poem however i didn't really know how to ...

thanks so much for the review!!

thanks so much!!!

Thank you so very much for your review!

thank you so much that would be very helpful.

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thank you for the review! I have never heard that song before so i will check it out!

Thank you for the review! I actually wrote it like that originally but it got messed up in the process.

ok thanks for clearing that up