Emerson

Hey there! Your line break was too long and was stretching out the front page, so I made it shorter. ^^

Hey there! I edited the line break in your story because it was too long and it was stretching out the front page. That's all! :)

Hello! I wanted to let you know I removed some equal signs (which you were using for a line break) from your post because if you use too many, it ...

Moderator's Note: I removed your last name from the post. Never give your full name out on the internet.

Yes, I had no control over the audio quality, it makes me mad too. But I'm happy to have it at all. Smorg: Well, considering everyone in Theatre Troupe will ...

Thank you both so much! Icaruss: Did you read the first part to this story? I don't remember a critique from you... It may not matter, but you might find ...

Hey Amber! I shortened your line breaks. Don't make them so long, or it stretched out the front page funny. Thanks!

Aw, you guys are amazing. Edits made! There are only one or two things I would change. One being the title. .... I could see how, at this point in ...

And I have a question. Your poem's tone is to purposely spell color like "colour," right? If so, I'm not sure if this is a typo or you purposely left ...

Hello! I edited the excessive punctuation out of your title. It's annoying and unnecessary. ^_^

Hey Amber! Just a note, try not to make your line breaks so long. I shortened it for you. If it's too long it stretches out the front page of ...

I changed the "Revised" part of your title to lowercase.

Thank you both, very much. ^^ MRM, I'm not sure I understood everything you were speaking of. You may receive a pm from me asking questions. At to Tennis Princess: ...

A short something for my dear reviewers! How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can ...

Edits added! Again, many, many thanks to all those who are editing. I think I'd really like some sleep now. :lol: I've lost sleep over this thing!! But I'm confident ...