Emerson

I have to admit I went into this expecting the usual (please take no offense!) sappy, depressed teen poem that floats around here. But I actually liked this. It has ...

Hey there! It's review time! REALITY: This is interesting but doesn't hold tight to reality. Easy for that to happen though, not all of us have gotten into a major ...

I'm not exactly sure what to say about this. I read it twice and that's as far as I'd give it to try and understand. I want to believe there ...

Hello there! Time for a review. I can feel hiding in all these words that you have a good voice, waiting to break out. Despite being in first person, you're ...

Hello there! This was an interesting read, to be sure. I can see you have a lot of emotional potential behind it but I feel like you didn't grab hold ...

Hey there! So I am here to review your poem. :D One thing you might want to keep in mind is to read over and edit your work a few ...

Hey there! Well the first thing I noticed was the title, of course. I noticed it because it's easily a line plucked right our of Robert Frost's "The Road Not ...

Hey there! I hope you're having a good vacation. :) Also, I'm glad you're looking for help! Sometimes I think people aren't willing to improve... So I'll give you what ...

Hey there! One big thing that stuck out at me in this piece was that your dialogue wasn't properly punctuated. Here is a quick example of how to punctuate dialogue: ...

Hey there! So one thing that really jumped out at me was the big time inconsistency in this piece. One moment, it's 1am, the next moment it's 3am. I doubt ...

Hey there GB! This is an amazingly dark poem. The level of gore is intense and your creativity with kitchen utensils is impressive, so for all that I really enjoyed ...

Hey there! :) I see you're anxious to get reviews. If you're looking for reviews, one good place to check out is the Will Review for Food area. But don't ...

Hello there! So what I love about this piece is that you tap into a very common feeling that people, especially women (of course, I Can only speak for women, ...

Hey there! You said, "I'm considering writing what happened to Elliots mum, throught Elliots Point of View. What do you think?" I don't really understand what you mean about what ...

Wow this is incredibly interesting! I hadn't been expecting all the torturous sadness of an immortal being in love with a human. It leaves so many questions. What special bond ...