Emerson

Hey there! Welcome to YWS also. :) I didn't realize you were knew when I reviewed your last poem. If you have any questions regarding the site or need help ...

Hi there! Oy, sonnets are so difficult! So I commend you even for trying. Though, really, without the iambic pentameter it isn't a sonnet, but you already knew that. ^_~ ...

Hi Connie! I am here to give you pain and something or other - a review. Conflict: So, I know what is going on because we discussed this a bunch, ...

Hello! At first I thought this was interesting and in some points it has a Rebel without a cause feel (I think it was the fist-fights) but overall it feels ...

Ooooo my goodness I love this. You make me happy inside. Here is why: it's just so freaking beautiful. It's simplistic, and contemplative, and introspective and yet you've done no ...

Hey Vox! First off, I'd like to ask you please not to bump your poetry. By "bump" I mean posting after yourself and saying, "I've had no reviews yet!" It's ...

I really love the mood of this poem because it is so honest and easy to relate to. A year goes by - and we feel like nothing has happened. ...

Hey there! Being that it is Christmas, Merry Christmas! On to the review. ^_~ Now, this might seem pretty basic and perhaps slightly rude of me, but there is a ...

Hmmm I'm not entirely sure what I think of this. I read your description of it and that kind of threw me off even more because that's not what I ...

Hahah, first off I have to say this poem reminds me of that song., you know? "Fly like an eagle! I'll spread my wings and...fly like an eagle!" Or... something. ...

Hey there! First off you have some minor typos or errors in the text, which could easily be fixed by some read throughs, so I won't waste my time with ...

Hey there! For a first poem it isn't so bad. :) What is interesting to me that "here" where it is empty is a really important piece of the poem ...

Hey there Pen! I think this is an interesting poem, but to me any form of writing that deals with music is incredebly hard and therefore needs to be incredebly ...

Hey there! So, while reading this I can't help myself but point something out regarding poetry. Poetry is an amazing form of self expression and can be great to get ...

Or [s]just[/s] did you [s]just[/s] brush it off and hurry on in your haste? You used "just" twice and it really weakens the line. I'd also remove "just" in the ...