Emerson

Hi Lilymoore! I don't really get a whole lot from this poem. I'm not sure how I feel about it. It's not bad, but it's not good either, you know? ...

Hi there! This seems like a good poem to keep in a journal or post on a blog, but as an outside reader, I didn't get very much from it. ...

Hi there! I'm glad you shared this with us. I really like the structure you have going. One thing I would highly recommend is to punctuate your poem, that would ...

Hi there! I had trouble really understanding what this poem was about. My first suggestion would be to add punctuation. Punctuation is extremely helpful in reading poetry since it tells ...

Hi there! This is pretty hard to follow and so I'm not sure what the actual content of it is or the purpose. I feel like this could potentially be ...

Hi there! I really like the idea of this, mostly because I love horror stories. However I'm not sure if this is the best place to start, in a narrative. ...

Hi there! I'm not sure how I feel about this, is it meant to be fiction or not fiction? I feel like it's a blog post, not really a story ...

Have this review! Moving closer to my favourite bar maid I think you only need to say once that it's the person's favorite. It's just redundant after that. So is ...

Howdy ROD. I'll cut to the chase and say I found this kind of boring and awkward to read. The story wasn't that original, to be honest - Russian roulette, ...

Hi there! I have to say this is an absolutely unique idea, to say the least. Being that it is so very much like marionette strings coming from the sky, ...

Hi there! The first thing I would like to say is this is a very sweet, touching, heartfelt "hallmark" piece of writing. I don't really know how else to describe ...

Hello there :) Sorry if I repeat anything Demeter said before me. My overall impression of this story is that the narration, the actually writing, is very strong - while ...

Howdy thar! So like I said in chat, major props for not being a naval gazing first person writer! Very hard to do first person convincingly. The best compliment I ...

Hi there Angel! Thank you for sharing this work. I think it's an interesting, original horror piece. To start with the good, you certainly have an interesting premise here, and ...

I really like the diction in this poem. You have some beautiful lines, beautiful imagery. I particularly liked the odder things you said. Tumble like washing machines... random things thrown ...