Ember

I think this was an interesting piece- plot is definitely your strong point. I was like 'Oh my gosh!' when she actually got kidnapped like Peter and her father said. ...

I no what you think Its gonna be another boring poem About how somebody has unspoken able beauty Or just to short of a skirt But this is about your ...

Hey, Tusker93, The Good Things: I could definitely feel the pain of your MC as if it were my own. The agony of not being able to help someone else, ...

Doesn't this belong in Fantasy Fiction? Then again, it's going to be Action/Adventure so why not? :) Prologue: Not a fan. I don't think you even need the prologue there ...

This was a really cool piece Aero- I really liked how you portrayed the relationship between the siblings perfectly. I have two little sisters, and honestly, that's exactly how I ...

This was a great piece in my opinion, because it wasn't the generic 'happily ever after' romance novel. I really liked the way you put Rachel as a symbol for ...

Wow, Rosey! I liked how you excellently tied in the elements of Celtic folklore and the day-to-day life of a college student. I thought it was a well done piece ...

Evi, This was an amazing piece of writing... no joke! You used a perfect combination of the senses and Alex's emotions to really put the conflict out there- that he ...

I just clicked the star button! Well done! I really liked the way your character went through a very dramatic series of changes in just a short amount of time. ...

Penguin, I really liked the way you put forth the dialogue. You could clearly see the personalities of the two characters less than halfway into the story. I don't know ...

I thought that this was a very interesting and great piece for two reasons. One, because I've never heard of anything like this before. I would have never thought of ...

I thought this was an excellent take on a higher power- this poem definitely got into God's head. I especially liked this part of the poem: [QUOTE]I created Earth in ...

I think you came on a little too fast for a first chapter- you explained Larara's life, the fight with her mom, Larara wakign up at three in the morning, ...

I loved this! You weaved together history and humor all in eight stanza's! I really found it hilarious- and I didn't spot any Spelling, Grammar or Punctuation mistakes. I'm sorry, ...

Hey there- I thought it was a good piece. You executed the writing very well and even managed to make my heart beat a little bit. Your metaphors were great ...