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ElvenJedi

ElvenJedi

  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Rach

    np =)

    Nov 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: you

    Ohhh I get it now! And no problem :D

    Nov 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Safe Place

    Thanks so much for the helpful review! I admit the rhyme scheme is a bit strange, o0ps. Thanks for the encouragement though, I appreciate it! :D

    Nov 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Safe Place

    Thanks for the helpful review! I chose the "room" concept because it's my personal safe place, but I get what you mean! Thanks again :D

    Nov 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Safe Place

    Thanks!

    Nov 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: you'd think.

    Thank you!!

    Nov 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: you'd think.

    Thanks :D

    Nov 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pounding Beats

    No problem! Glad you found it helpful :)

    Nov 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: you'd think.

    Thanks for the helpful review & suggestion!

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Me

    ...oops again... I forgot what this website does to emojis. that spam of numbers and percent signs was meant to be a face palm emoji XD

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Me

    Thanks for the review! I meant reverse as in chaotic, but I totally didn't consider the more common meaning! oops xP thanks for pointing that out, I'll try to think ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Rabbit

    No problem! Re-reading now, the rhyme scheme makes more sense :)

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Rainy days

    No problem!

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: you'd think.

    Thanks for the review! The poem was meant to communicate the character's hopelessness, but your opinion is definitely helpful- I'll be sure to consider adding some positivity in the future ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: you'd think.

    Thanks so much for the encouraging review! You interpreted it perfectly!

    Nov 22, 2018


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