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Re: Love is Normal
I really like the message of this poem, especially since we tend to associate poetry with romanticism and very idealistic ideas of love. It was really clever to use poetry ...
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Re: life is not good and evil
Head over heels in love with this!! Such a cool concept and fantastic execution. The poem itself is sparklingly beautiful (and very personally relatable to me), and I think the ...
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Re: greys of heart
I like this! The imagery is vivid and I could picture everything really easily. As for criticism, not every line needs to end with a comma. Careful to not overuse ...
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Re: Guilt Has Found Me Again
Ooh, this is so good!! I found it a very relatable and cathartic read. I think it taps into the feelings that a lot of us harbor but might not ...
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Re: we live once by Kungu J. Opondo 2023
Hello! So, I don’t really know how to feel about this piece. I can’t tell if it needs work or if I’m just not getting it? It kind of reads ...
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Re: monkeys and bears and tears
Hello again and wow! This is another great poem. You’re so good at capturing emotion and imbuing it in your work. This made me feel things, and that’s always a ...
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Re: The Son of the Night - Chapter 1: A Man's Needs
This is a very interesting, promising premise! I love love love mythology, especially Persephone and Hecate. You’ve taken some of the most fabulous characters and dropped them into this story, ...
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Re: When tears are only tears
Wow. This is a hugely impactful piece. I find it very meaningful and relatable, speaking as someone who suffers from depression. You’ve captured those complicated feelings so well. This is ...
Jan 26, 2024
