EloquentDragon

ED here to review! So I can tell you've put a lot into this story, as it seems very personal. This is a good thing. There isn't a whole lot ...

Yo there! I must say, your first paragraph sort of had me hooked. I don't know what it was, but maybe the style was so unique. It was dry, desperate ...

Yo! So, I clicked on this expecting a mystery or suspense type story, and was sort of confused at first, but a few paragraphs in this seemed more like a ...

I was going to read your Western story but happened upon this one instead. Seems you're a history enthusiast. This story is interesting, but I am sort of lost as ...

I'm not sugar coating any of this, so he we go. This was good. Not the best I've ever seen, but it'll probably pass for a Lit class. ;) What ...

Alright, sorry for the delay, ED here with some feedback. First off, this is my favorite section here: My Mom is doing that hissing whisper that adults do when they ...

First off, I’m going to say that there’s nothing wrong with being “grim” or “macabre,” not everyone gets a “warm, fuzzy feeling” at Christmas time, after all. But as you ...

First of all, it was incredibly difficult for me to come up with any feedback to give you, since there are so few errors with this. It is classic and ...

Hmmm. I had one, and only one problem with this. This piece is so beautifully vague and surreal... then you (quite blandly) state: "I am a fictional character, living in ...

Well, since I've been around I'm not going to give an introduction here. Let's just get straight down to business, shall we? First Read: My first thought here was that ...

*Checks to make sure this is the right chapter* Hmm, yes, this is episode one, alrighty then... I am finally here for a first chapter review. Now, please note that ...

ow’st; Bwah ha ha ha ha. What word is this even supposed to be? "Art" there, but keep the "ow'st" because it's so ridiculous.* I could look into your hot ...

Well, you sent this over chat so I figured I'd leave a couple comments. 1. This is an immature story, as you said. A group of morons traveling on an ...

AAAAAAH!!! Where is the rest, seriously, do I have to wait an entire week for the next one to come out? I just spent an hour reading through every single ...

Minor details below: "S...S'il vous plait..." He pleaded quietly to no one, and stopped, crouching helplessly, as uncontrollable shakes caused him to drop the makeshift tool from his hand. A ...