ElizabethFiction

Wow, this poem speaks to me in volumes. Please continue to publish this beautiful work! :)

This poem is simply captivating and beautiful. It just shows the impact a death can have on someone even if they don't know the victim. I loved it! :)

Even though I am a fan of more cheerful literature, nothing catches my attention more than a dark poem. This poem is awesome!! :)

Such a great poem! I love the skillful use of similes and imagery, and I felt as if I was in the poetry. Also I love dark poems!! :]

This poem sends an inspiring message to anyone who feels trapped in a place that they can't get out of... Keep writing!! :)

Thank you for pointing out the space out... I think it was a typo but thank goodness you noticed. Thank you for reading, hope you enjoyed!! :)

I found this poem to be very captivating. Your use of symbolism is perfect and this really made my day!! :)

Wow, this poem reaches into the deepest regions of my soul and strikes the very core of my being. I think that this poem relates to pretty much everyone!! Loved ...

Aside from.the message of this poem, it took my breath away. I don't think I can put it into words how amazing this poem is! This is my new favorite ...

I love poems that have dark, dramatic themes only because I can just imagine the angst and pain that was put into this poem. I love it!! :)

I loved the point of view you used to portray the narrator. Great poem, keep writing!! :D

This has got to be the deepest poem I have ever read! You've got such an incredible sense of depth, especially for your age. Beautiful job!! :)

For a short piece it sure tells a lot about love and how it can sometimes cause destruction when there is conflict between lovers.. This story was amazing!! :)

Lol I love this poem, it's so clever. Human nature strikes again. If we see something that is meant to stay off limits or forbidden of course we're gonna check ...

This is one of the best poems I've ever read! It was so beautiful and vehement, and I can't think of anything else to say right now because I'm just ...