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Re: Friend
It seemed a bit forced with the rhyme.... And thanks to that arsehole I'll now post what I thought was a bit cheezy. Bloody, I have been here longer than ...
Mar 25, 2005 -
Re: A NEW BEGININNG- please read
Yeah, niteowl butchered it pretty well :-P. Well instead of shatter you can use tear. Sometimes it's not too bad to use smaller words and i learned that through a ...
Mar 24, 2005 -
Re: The Thunder Rolls
hehehe I loved this one... I wish I had the guts to... I mean, nice. I must say one thing. I wish they didn't talk like mellow-dramatic teenagers. I mean, ...
Mar 23, 2005 -
Re: Prose: "Chronicles of the Dhampir: Emergence"
Jesus... no wonder you got 50 posts this is a very good begining. it makes me sick to think about all th women witht the gapping wounds in their necks.. ...
Mar 15, 2005 -
Re: Shall We Dance?
Aragh this was just like another poem that I read... it went on and on with the last line from the stanza being th first to the next.... And do ...
Mar 14, 2005 -
Re: Granted Wishes
Um... why did you post the whole "“Listen to the birds sing their angelic songs. Listen to their beautifully colored wings as they flutter by, Remember these moments as you ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Nat, or Naught: A Family History: Part I: Chapters I & I
Ah, very discriptive, lovely. This sort of reminded me about a movie I watched the begnining of, it started out with two young boys. There are many words I haven't ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: The League of Ordinary Gentlemen Chapter 1
This is begnining to ring me back to the time when I wasn't born or can even recall... nice job I liked this.... so did my dad he's chuckling... now ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: .
" “I guess we’re all perverts,” he said, as he went back to his room." You are so right, that is pretty much all I got from the story. And ...
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: Farenheit 451
Ray Bradburry wrote this book and I love him so much. He also Wrote Something Wicked this Way Comes. I was about to buy this book so I think I ...
Mar 2, 2005 -
Re: Timmy [Geeks]
I didn't really understand it. He sounds popular. I'd stay away, things lead to things. Of course this was some other year, some other life. I liked it otherwise... Are ...
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: Over 13: The AIM Tango
I browsed the whole time... it's kinda hard to believe if it was real what kinda person would type about a million sentences before getting a reply. It was good ...
Feb 18, 2005 -
Re: Andrew--True Story
I could picture this... I could actually... Wow... that is harsh what he did to you. Just when you think you know a person... What was strange though is why ...
Feb 7, 2005 -
Re: Australia and Egypt
Very good. I'm doing a report about Poland.... (-_-) WAH!!! I would too go to australia, it's because my uncle lives there... he ... is having an operation... and I ...
Feb 4, 2005 -
Re: MARY - MAY OFFEND (Over 13 for language)
Holy sh*** man. What was this all about? Ye Olde Pub or whatever and then you go on using b*** and b****** and Cuz. It's not in the same time ...
Jan 28, 2005
