Elizabeth

Somewhere, at sometime, in some place, to somebody their dog just exploded as I read this GODDAMNIT limericks are so hilarios... oough that hurt to read... there was one I ...

Hmm... this is exactly why I listen to my dad. *forgets why* Nice job... Now that i think of it, your style seems akwrd to me... no offence or anything ...

Tell me your number, Tell me your sly, Tell me you are trustworthy, Don't ever make me cry. YOU'RE SLY and why didn't ou say YOU'RE for YOU ARE TRUSTWORTHY?? ...

Dang.... What kinda boy are you? I actually sort of understood this more than any of your other strange poems... Jesus... "When I escaped from the chamber of mirrors, breathed ...

I liked the idea of this but there are some things i don't like... Your first and second stanza: Life is a wind tossed wave that rushes for the shore, ...

that was really really pretty. God i'm teary eyed... What happened to Nicola? I still have your tears on my shoulder, and I'll leave them there until you come for ...

"Duh!""Figures," I wispered, opening a can of soda and closeing the frige, "want to keep me company while I finnish mine?" "Sure," ... yeesh... "Duh!" "Figures," I wispered, opening a ...

Some counselors and some girls in the bathroom said it was really good First of (O_O) Secondly I aggree with these people in the bathroom... although I don't know why ...

God damnit this was lovely but did you have to say hell in the first verse? I mean, it could be the exact same thing without it... Chorus: Carradyne the ...

Heh it wsan't that bad. the only thing that bugged me was the entire format of your play... and what was with all the: ® ® ® ® ? I ...

This sounds like something BULLETPROOF wrote (Ironically enough) I don't know, what is up with this depression theme? It is so when i was into it :P But, seriously, it's ...

Quite near the beginning of time there was a great flood and three of each species of animal were taken aboard fleets of barges and arks. There was one male, ...

Whoa... this had this rythem that was a bit annoying to read over ad over but it was still a rythem... Yeah, I have known people (myself even) who have ...

I took the crude advice you gave in GRIEF and read this and yes it was fairly decent. This hoonestly sounds sort of like the story I'm writing only my ...

.... I can swear she took everything I was saying.... Of course, she is a better poet than I am... yeah, bit this was seriously confusing. What and who were ...