Yes, because it's called perception. Am I right? Am I right!? And, for lack of feedback, I end with that.
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Hmm... this is exactly why I listen to my dad. *forgets why*
Nice job...
Now that i think of it, your style seems akwrd to me... no offence or anything but periods in the middle of the line of a stanza makes you breathe in the wrong places...
Tsk tsk tsk, this guy needs to stop eating sugar and slow down...
How realistic and literal. God, that's when I love it the most. I loved the last stanza...it would end perfectly at one of my unreleased poems. *Looks around*
For some reason, this poem made me think of Chevrolet and myself...don't know why but sometimes your poems can put weird effects on me. And,
"with God for a neon sign
and a vacancy."
How clever.