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Re: Staying True.
"The dream" is that part of the poem or the title like put there? "I'll wait for you...will you wait for me" ? at the end It was a bit ...
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: you know, you could have said something
....... And this is what taking a dump can lead to children. DON'T TAKE A DUMP OR YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE SEX WITH YOUR FAMILY MEMBERS! Also.... Oh God, this ...
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: I love it. I mean you.
Did you happen to love a mega mouthed shark? :P Sorry, lol, I'll be more realistically rational once I get some sleep and stop thinking about how much I love/hate ...
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: Just a Request
This was short And I hoped you weren't trying to rhyme air with ear :P. Twisted vile words, snaking through the air like water slithering off rock and into my ...
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: 2 Part Love Poem: 2nd Edition
Last night, you walked me to my door but there was no kiss or hand-holding, there were lilies instead of roses, their tiny trumpets silently sounding the things I've tried ...
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: For The One Who Should Be Here
like all your work this was no acception to confuzzling.... but it gave good imagery. weird imagery though: aluminum cans crushed by a tire—no. They sounded human, like laughter, longing, ...
Sep 1, 2005 -
Re: reflection in the calm waters of a bathtub
yeah this was kinda creepy chilling like chevy said but oh so good like candy or something hmm.... if i pulled out a star on you now would you cry? ...
Sep 1, 2005 -
Re: T.O.B.O.C.F - Chapter TWO!! I think... Yeah... Read Pwease
”It’s alright, she erm… Likes talking,” He said to me,. BWAHAHAHA... that's the same excuse me friends pull if I go too far... Bored I turned it off and went ...
Aug 28, 2005 -
Re: "Affirmations" A character sketch
First let me rattle off and say: "It was her mother's stubborness that had kept her from speaking to Angie for more than three years. Ever since Angie ran off ...
Aug 28, 2005 -
Re: Ying Yang, Inverted
This was very rythmatic i nmy opinion because I read very strangely. This was very imaginative as well. It made me think of somebodys view of heaven, which I'm sure ...
Aug 25, 2005 -
Re: Poem--"To the weak it's the End"
Well it made me feel good to have hints as to the meaning of this. Sorry I wasn't in my mood earlier where I read and write and laugh and ...
Aug 25, 2005 -
Re: Journal Meditation Poem
Lake Supirior is freaken huge.... Some day, clouds may cover the sky and the moon and sun may hide in shame, but this beautiful dragonfly has been washed at last ...
Aug 25, 2005 -
Re: some slam poetry
I can easily memorize this. Tsk tsk tsk though, seriously-was all of that ranting anger nessisary? It pretty much was entiirely repitant or whatever you spell it... (however). You should ...
Aug 25, 2005 -
Re: clock of fate
Just because you're my friend and I'm bored beyond belief I'll help wit the entire story I looked nervously at my watch; the time slowly ticking by. Each (CAPITAL E) ...
Aug 23, 2005 -
Re: A New Roman Adventure (is the name ok?) Part I
...check-in area in the ----- St Train station. They are going on an excursion to the ------Museum, and their train was a striking bright blue colour what is with all ...
Aug 22, 2005
